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A Challenge and A Drabble – The Darkness

Caroline Smailes issued a tiny challenge here on her blog to write a 100 word story (what I would call a drabble) inspired by any song on Youtube.

Here is my offering, inspired by Florence and the Machine’s ‘Cosmic Love’.


 

The Darkness

by PC Wheeler

 

I did not expect to find Julie in the boy’s bathroom. Blood circled her wrists and streaked across the floor.

“What did you do?”

This was Julie: honor student and cheerleader. She was nothing like me. She lived in a mansion;  my mom and I lived in a trailer.

She looked at me, maybe for the first time, and said, “I needed to know I could feel something.”

“You’re not doing it right,” I said and pushed my black sleeves up to show her the parallel scars on the insides of my forearms. “I’ll show you how.”

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It’s all about the characters!

I’ve been indulging in a guilty pleasure, lately. Namely, I’ve been writing fanfiction. (Doctor Who fanfiction specifically, but that’s not the important bit.) I suppose it’s good that I’m writing something, at least, and even fanfiction gives me a chance to play with words and craft stories. But I think the biggest thing it’s done for me is allow me to see what the problem is with my regular writing.

Because when I write fanfiction, it just flows. You see, it’s easy to write when you’re inspired, and it’s easy to be inspired by a set of characters fully made with all their quirks, their history and their issues already laid out before you. At that point it’s easy to place the characters in a certain situation and let the story unfold. If the characters are fully developed, believable people, then their words and actions will flow naturally.

Fanfiction certainly allows you to explore your craft. It teaches you to be consistent with your characterization, it teaches you how to craft a believable plot, how to find your voice even, but it does not tell you how to create a good character. I’m including world building under the heading of character creation, because the place a character exists in is as much a part of them as their hair color or personality traits.

So, I can see when I write fanfiction what my own original writing lacks – good, believable characters. I’ve been focusing too much on STORY and not enough on CHARACTERS, and while STORY is important, it is a rudderless ship without the CHARACTERS to inhabit it.

How do you create good characters? I’ve read a little about this and everyone has their own formula. In my opinion, formulas don’t always work – they tend to make things rather… formulaic. My best characters, in my opinion, have been ones that have sprung, fully grown, from my imagination rather than the ones that have to be built up, layer by layer, but that’s just me. I think it’s a very individual thing and some writers just have a gift for bringing forth great characters. For those of us who don’t… well, I think it’s more a little bit of practice makes perfect.

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#fridayflash – Gerrod the Goatherd (fantasy, humor)

Trying something a little different with a bit of humor in the fantasy genre. I’m a huge fan of writers like Terry Pratchett and Douglas Adams.

Gerrod the Goatherd

by PC Wheeler

“It is your destiny,” the old man said. “You are the last of a line of hidden kings, and now the time is ripe for you to seek out the sword of your forefathers and stand against the rising darkness.”

Gerrod raised the brim of his wide hat, spat out the bit of grass he’d been chewing, and turned his gaze from the valley spread out below. “Can’t. I’m busy, you see. Goats don’t herd themselves.”
Continued…

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